YuGiOh Deck Discussion

Noticed we didn't have one here... So yeah. I made one.

Thought I'd post this deck, see what you think of it. I never bought the Zombie World Structure deck, I made this on my own:

EDIT: REVISED AND RE-AWESOMED


Monsters

Dark Crusader x2
Pyramid Turtle x3
Paladin of the Cursed Dragon
Kasha
Vampire Lord
Obsidian Dragon
Malevolent Mech - Goku En
Dark Dust Spirit
Zombie Master x3
Vampire's Curse
Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon x2
Spirit Reaper
Old Vindictive Magician

Spells

Brain Control
Mystical Space Typhoon
Pot of Avarice
Call of the Mummy x2
Book of Life x2
Book of Moon
Zombie World x2
Lightning Vortex
Swords of Revealing Light
Different Dimension Capsule

Traps

Sakuretsu Armor x3
Torrential Tribute
Trap of the Imperial Tomb
Zoma the Spirit
Magic Cylinder
Call of the Haunted


Advice please...

Alright, let me post you my poorfag zombie deck

(Marked poorfag means it needs to be removed)

The Lady in Wight (poorfag)
Ryu Kokki
Red-Eyes Zombie Dragon
Gorz the Emissary of Darkness
Zombie Master x3
Return Zombie (poorfag)
Marionette Mite (poorfag)
Paladin of the Cursed Dragon
Regenerating Mummy x2 (poorfag)
Malevolent Mech - Goku En
Despair from the Dark x2
The Creator
Getsu Fuhma
Pyramid Turtle x2
Spirit Reaper

Book of Life x3
Call of the Mummy x2
Swords of Revealing Light
Card of Safe Return
Ribbon of Rebirth (poorfag)
Everliving Underworld Canon
Zombie World x2
Lightning Vortex
Magical Stone Excavation
Mage Power
Double Summon

Soul Rope
Scrap-Iron Scarecrow
Torrential Tribute
Eradicator Epidemic Virus
Call of the Haunted

Now obviously my deck needs work. Needs removed:
The Lady in Wight, Return Zombie, Marionette Mite, Regenerating Mummy and needs + Dark Crusaders, Mezuki, Il Bud, Kasha, Vampire's Curse.

Needs removed Ribbon of Rebirth for another Zombie World.

YOUR deck needs removed:
Shadow Ghoul (WTF)
Old Vindictive
Pot of Avarice (you want to sp summon from the graveyard, not have a blank grave)
Book of Moon (??)
DD Capsule
Obsidian Dragon
Dark Dust Spirit
Vampire Lord

Stick in a third Book of Life. Third Zombie World. More Paladin of the Curse Dragon. And the cards I listed as needing.